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Best self written poem

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total challengers: 23   
1st
The world so bright
A crack appears
The light dims
Fades, just disappears

Mask the sadness
Hide the pain
Put on a smile
Dont show the shame

Nothings wrong
Or so it seems
Blow it off
Release the steam

Hold your head high
As high as you can
Not as high as you thought
Who's to blame?

Keep it bottled up
Hold the bomb in
Let the emotions rise
Let control run thin

Divide the worlds
So different now
Tell the people?
Wouldnt think to allow (see more)
 
congaixcutiee
RATING: 3.7  VIEWS: 177  VOTES: 19

 

2nd
stick figures and rollercoasters,
children puttin up rock and roll posters,
a world wide kid nation,
this is just my imagination,
lots if laughter, lots of cries,
so many rumores so many lies,
maybe one of gods creation,
only in my imagination,
sleeping on clouds and dreaming of toys,
you cant hear any more noise,
trying to find finding the hidden,
all the kids in my imagination,
in the sky flying with no fear,
looking at the sky so clear,
a huge mall with todays new fashion,
wondering in my imagination,
blue red orange green rainbow colors,
our time has so many numbers,
were so tired, we are done
we are all still here in my imagination


 (see more)
 
jadex
RATING: 3.6  VIEWS: 135  VOTES: 21

 

3rd
I sit atop a mountain
Where no one ever goes
Thinking very deeply
Of all the unknown
Why my life’s a wreck
And what I didn’t do
Sitting there alone
Only thinking of you
Dreaming that one day
Wondering if you’ll see
Past all of what this is
And see the face of me
I never will forget
All of what is true
I never will move on
Unless it is with you
And If you come to realize
That someone really cares
I’ll be atop that mountain
Wiping all my tears.

 (see more)
 
joeym333
RATING: 3.3  VIEWS: 138  VOTES: 16

 

4th
Thoughts running through my mind
Telling me nothings better than what I have to find Searching and searching till I craw, stop and linger
Then that vision once again sparks just like a pointing finger
I stand back up and search as if I have just started
Looking as high as the sky and digging in places I've already parted
A familiar desire of pain and anxiety
Asking me why is this my first priority
A second desire of joy and happiness
Tells me nothing can be better and that I will find this

I start to run as if I've found my destination
Picking up pace as desire becomes an inspiration
Swimming across oceans wilder than ones imagination
Leaping from heights far beyond visibility
Gaining powers never known to be an ability
What I'm searching for is truly of great purity
I stop turn around and face where I began
It seems as if I have never searched nor have I ran
But what is it that is stealing my mind
Whatever it is, I will try my best to find (see more)
 
ha_me3
RATING: 3.1  VIEWS: 91  VOTES: 7

 

5th
Have you ever felt,
when you meet this girl.
Your looking at her,
and she's looking back.
Feeling like time just stopped.
Feeling your heart is pounding,
so hard you can hear it.
Then you get closer to her,
and when you hold her in your arms,
never wanting to let go,
feeling like she is the only one you been looking for.
No one else can get between you two,
letting time pass by,
and it wont matter,
because everything you want and need is in your arms.
Knowing that she loves you,
and you know that you love her.
Looking into her eyes,
seeing nothing else exept her.
Wishing this could last forever.
not one person can get between you two.
Seeing the sparkles in her eyes,
as if she want you.
Lost in her world ,
just you and her.
Thanking god for a girl like this.
because she is one of a kind,
and you will never find any other girl like this.
You can feel two hearts,
yet only one beat.
Then one little kiss,
and there you realize,
she's the one.
 (see more)
 
pin0yball3r92
RATING: 3.1  VIEWS: 56  VOTES: 4

 

6th
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She is looking at me...
Damn, She is so pretty...
She is over my league...
She is walking towards me...
Oh yeah!!!

YA!, YA!, YA!, YA!, YA-EE-YA!, YA!
YA!, YA!, YA!, YA!, YA-EE-YA!, YA!

Okay, I am so nervous.
Damn, I can't focus..
I haven't said a thing,
Because Im so retarded,
I got to say something,
instead..I JUST FARTTED!!

(Oh, oh, oh-no)
I don't got game,
(Oh, oh, oh-no)
She walked away,
Away...

a flatus expelled through the anus.
So ludicrous,
So ridiculous!!!!

But what am I saying?
Im not the poem type of guy.
So this is, goodbye.
 (see more)
 
cdan1028
RATING: 2.9  VIEWS: 105  VOTES: 13

 

7th
As i sit in my room alone,
what irony it is to be at home,
when i left you said you'd wait,
i gave you a chance to walk away,
i wrote you everyday but you made it seem,
the day i left you forgot about me,
now i sit outside and nothings fine,
i actually thought you were rightfully mine,
i guess i bought into all your lies,
even in doubt i stood by your side,
but when i leave i never really go,
ill haunt you at night and i know that you know,
when you wake up screaming out loud,
remembering the night of that awful sound,
i know these are words that are written on paper,
but still they are my words and can leave you disabled,
i pull out a gun a pen and a pad,
im thinking and thinking and what im thinking is bad,
i begin to write these letters your reading right now,
as you keep reading dont put on a frown,
its not your fault i let my guard down,
and you reading this can only mean,
i put my self out of my own misery,
when all you had to do was love me. (see more)
 
cloud_strife_dreamer
RATING: 2.7  VIEWS: 80  VOTES: 6

 

8th
Looking at you seems like I found a pot of gold.

A pot, which is reserved for the luckiest man in the world to hold.

No day passes by when I don’t think of your beautiful smile.

And to me you’re twice as good because I like your style.

You and I together will be the best thing that ever happened to me.

Babe, you and I will be a classic like the play “Romeo and Juliet”.

I look into your eyes and I see the warmth and fire.

So let me be the water that pleases your desire.

 (see more)
 
dcross
RATING: 2.7  VIEWS: 47  VOTES: 8

 

9th
"...because everything i say about you...is true...its easy saying nice things to people who are nice and everyone loves...you just set yourself up for it...being yourself"
 (see more)
 
vbballer12
RATING: 2.7  VIEWS: 50  VOTES: 9

 

10th
The daisy's emerge from the soil,
sneak through the bed of grass.
The grass so soft and elegant.
Go lay down on the grass.
Smell it, touch it, listen to the sounds
from each blade. As you lay on
the grass the sounds of roots
and trunks are grunting and yearning
to emerge from underneath to
display thier beauty. A beauty
unlike no other, thier branches
just gleaming in the open.
An experience only equivalent to
teh sight of a bright winter sun
bearing down on the layers of white
snow, creating a magnificent light
that illumiates anyones day. As the
snow melts and the water creates
a stream thats carries all that was
underneath it, so goes my soul.
Carried to the banks of a lake
surrounded by every flower that can
be imagined. All the colors collaborating
in perfect sequence around the lake
and myself. The birds chirping a merry
jingle from beyond the flowers.
Is this a fairy tale I've created
Or a life worth debating
Would you trade anything for a perfect
walk with the perfect pe (see more)
 
joeym333
RATING: 2.5  VIEWS: 55  VOTES: 8

 

11th

I feel so sick; I’m tired of this.

It just feels like it will never go away.

I just want to run and be free, but I can’t.

I feel paralyzed from head to toe.

I’m just dreaming of running and being free.

It feels so nice that I wish I will never wake up.

So I will never feel that incredible pain again.
 (see more)
 
dcross
RATING: 2.5  VIEWS: 21  VOTES: 7

 

12th
I love you,You are the only one for me
I will take care of you and be the best I can be
I will make sure you are alright when you are sore
And kiss you until you would want no more
When you cry I will be there to bring you cheer
and when your lonely just know that I'm always near
So open your hands because I'm giving you my heart
for it burst every time me and you are apart
all I ever wanted was nothing more than you
and I wait for the day that my wish will come true
Your always in my thoughts always in my head
Whenever I think about you I blush,so my cheeks are always red
For without you my dear I am not whole
Like a pen with no ink or a body with no soul
So I ask you a question,Will you be mine
And make me very happy this valentine  (see more)
 
American_Terrorist
RATING: 2.5  VIEWS: 21  VOTES: 6

 

13th
Go ahead kill me I wanna die
their ain't nothing you can do I didn't try
Use a gun shot me in the heart
take the knife and cut my limbs apart
Get the rope put it around my neck
throw me in the desert watch the vultures peck
vertically cut open my wrist
beat me down with your fist
come on I thought you were going to kill me
cut me open and watch my blood flow like the sea
I'll stand still run me over with your truck
take out the sticks and treat my head like a hockey puck
go ahead stomp me out with your tims
put weights on my legs and throw me in water so I can't swim
pierce my skin and watch me bleed to death
slap me around as I take my last breath
take my water and fill it up with poison
take a spike and impale my head starting from the chin
Take the pen I'm now using to write these words
and stab me in the neck so this poem won't be heard  (see more)
 
American_Terrorist
RATING: 2.4  VIEWS: 39  VOTES: 8

 

14th
Bitch done hurt me filled me up with pain
Got me crazy in the head now I'm insane
I didn't know it could happen but she fucked with my brain
Didn't know she had the power to suck me in like a drain
Now I'm sitting here staring out looking at the rain
as it falls like my tears smashing into the window pane
I cry as she starts to get in me,in my veins
I fight myself trying to stop myself,Restrain
Now she's gone didn't know she could be so cold
Wondering why she let go of her embracing hold
My relationship with her was never before told
now she switched it around now I'm being sold
I thought I took control of it I was for once bold
But I was wrong I didn't think that I would fold
I didn't know how fast this could grow old
but she is so good something like gold
I fucked up now I don't know what to do
All I got to say is don't let her get to you  (see more)
 
American_Terrorist
RATING: 2.2  VIEWS: 30  VOTES: 5

 

15th
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Too Late

We were so perfectly perfect,
So deeply in love.
I loved you from the start,
And then you broke my heart.
I never gave up on you,
But I thought you’d be there for me too.
I waited for months,
Counted the days,
Until you would come back to me
Instead of hurting me in so many ways.
I guess it just wasn’t enough to give my love away,
Even when I tried, you said
It wasn’t good enough anyway.
I wish you could only see,
That you’re the only one for me.
I promise to wait as long as it takes,
I’ll just step aside and hope that you can see it’s not Fake.
You are my air, but you won’t let me breathe,
You are my world, but all you do is leave.
You were my everything,
I was your nothing,
Watch your nothing walk away from her everything.
Now you finally realized what you mean to me,
But now it’s too late
I told you I’d wait, but it was too hard
To see my love with someone new.
I hope you’ll forgive me, but
Now you finally see
What it was like to be me.
We wer (see more)
 
peaches_n_apples
RATING: 2.2  VIEWS: 29  VOTES: 5

 

16th
I made this for my ex and things are still quite right.

I’m alone for a while
And I just couldn’t live with this style
I should make a move
There are many things I should prove

It was way back when all I have is a glimpse
If you only knew, how much I want to be beside you
Those are the times I want something to be true
Yet there’s nothing I could do.

I always remember the way you stand
Those eyes I tried to look at
That face that reigns in my morning
My heart just can’t stop yearning

Now let me tell you,
These words I’m about to say is true
I’ll wait for the day that I finally mean these words
I love you.

Give me a moment, give me the time
Let your heart listen to mine
Share to me everything you’ve been goin’ through
And let me breathe with you.



 (see more)
 
ms_ellah
RATING: 2.2  VIEWS: 21  VOTES: 5

 

17th
Once upon a time there lived a young knight
He was good-looking and had a good heart
But his intelligence was low and wasn’t very bright
He didn’t know left or right or even how to start

One day the king asked him for a favor
To rescue his daughter from the great, mighty dragon
The knight will prove that he was much braver
And get a ride in the marriage wagon

So the knight set off to find the dragon’s cave
And when he arrived the dragon said
“To awake me in my slumber you must be either foolish or brave,
I have fought thousands and thousands but never have bled.”

The knight answered
“I have come to rescue the damsel in distress,
And from my quest I shall not be deterred,
I shall spill your guts out and on you floor make a mess.”

There is a fact that even the foolish fool knows
It is that a dragon has but one vulnerable spot
It is located on its left leg and barely shows
One stab of the sword and the body will die and rot

Therefore, the clever dragon said to lure t (see more)
 
moh_oh
RATING: 2.2  VIEWS: 38  VOTES: 6

 

18th
We talked that night
I was really upset
I was like I lost my sight
There was things I just didnt get.

I couldnt stand the pain
I dont think she knew
I tried to explain
But her anger grew.

I couldnt believe it.
This was actually happening
I just wanted to forget it
And go back to the beginning.

I remember this day at the park
I told her about the falling leaves
That they represented my heart
And that there are many trees.

My love for her will never end
Ill wait for her once again
Shes what i asked god to send
Ill be upset until then.

She left me..
I lost my sight
It was upsetting
And thats The Night. (see more)
 
Munkey
RATING: 2.1  VIEWS: 12  VOTES: 3

 

19th

 

20th
I've walked more than a lone camel lost in a desert
I've tried to fly but my wings seem to be tired
Walking this long road which seems to be endless
My body wants to fall and my heart wants to retire
I keep thinking about tomorrow, will it ever come?
I keep thinking about yesterday, which is already gone
God give me the strength to keep holding on
God give me a reason to keep walking on
I know it will be worth it walking this road
The road of life the road of God
 (see more)
 
LatinoLoko
RATING: 2.1  VIEWS: 42  VOTES: 7



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Comments

DaveyCrocket
DaveyCrocket franchise
over 3 years ago
re: my work!!
damn bro.. you got skillz! 5
congaixcutiee
congaixcutiee captain
over 3 years ago
re: Beyond My Mind
ahhh i realllyy like yours too!!!!! its so visual i can really relate and see it in my head haha! awesome job! :] 555
congaixcutiee
congaixcutiee captain
over 3 years ago
re: Closed Up - My Poem
thanks! :)P
icrashthings
icrashthings captain
over 3 years ago
re: perfect moment
I think we all definitely feel this =D
coke4pepsi
coke4pepsi captain
over 3 years ago
re: perfect moment
felt that in my dreams!!!hahaha
P_3guy
P_3guy HOFer
over 3 years ago
re: Beyond My Mind
nice...haha
ha_me3
ha_me3 pro
over 3 years ago
re: Beyond My Mind
I just wrote it. And that still applies to me today lol
P_3guy
P_3guy HOFer
over 3 years ago
re: Beyond My Mind
Did you do that for a class or just to do it??
ha_me3
ha_me3 pro
over 3 years ago
re: Closed Up - My Poem
Thats awesome! I like it alot 5!!!
congaixcutiee
congaixcutiee captain
over 3 years ago
re: Closed Up - My Poem
thankss :)
josofresh
josofresh starter
over 3 years ago
re: Closed Up - My Poem
that's a really good poem good job keep it up =)
leann87
leann87 all-star
over 3 years ago
re: my work!!
awww thats beautiful:)5
cloud_strife_dreamer
over 3 years ago
re: Perfect Irony
cuz u are
congaixcutiee
congaixcutiee captain
over 3 years ago
re: Perfect Irony
LOL thanks? but what makes u say that haha
cloud_strife_dreamer
over 3 years ago
re: Perfect Irony
yeah LOL , ur cute
congaixcutiee
congaixcutiee captain
over 3 years ago
re: Perfect Irony
o0o0ohkkk! haha thats goodd
cloud_strife_dreamer
over 3 years ago
re: Perfect Irony
no it's nothing like that it's a metaphor for eternal love LOL
congaixcutiee
congaixcutiee captain
over 3 years ago
re: Perfect Irony
ahh thats great! hopefully this isnt about you lol but 5555!
cloud_strife_dreamer
over 3 years ago
re: Closed Up - My Poem
nice poem im join this comp so check out mine
peaches_n_apples
over 3 years ago
joeym333
joeym333 legend
over 3 years ago
re: just a night
tks =)
peaches_n_apples
over 3 years ago
re: just a night
nice : )
miguel81
miguel81 pro
over 3 years ago
re: Closed Up - My Poem
ur welcome...
3vanessa3love
3vanessa3love captain
over 3 years ago
re: Closed Up - My Poem
cut333333
congaixcutiee
congaixcutiee captain
over 3 years ago
re: Closed Up - My Poem
thank youu!! :)
 

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