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Best poem about love, hate or both. Rate by content and originality


total challengers: 19   
1st
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Got us a rose most shiny,
On the sun of faith and glory
Than you so rare treasure,
Getting world hearts in your hand
After that sunnny season ends
Mundial people of the site
Enlights his life from his seat  (see more)
 
silver_surfer
RATING: 4.5  VIEWS: 160  VOTES: 9

 

2nd
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MY POEM BOUT GOTGAME

THIS IS MY POEM BOUT GOTGAME,
SHE'S PRETTY FUNNY,
NEVER IS SHE LAME,
EVEN WHEN HER NOSE IS RUNNY.

SHE RUNS THIS SHIT,
LIKE SHE DID UCLA,
NOW SHE'S A MONSTER HIT,
LIKE LADY GAGA LOVES THE LAMES.

THE END. :) (see more)
 
jishjosh
RATING: 4.4  VIEWS: 113  VOTES: 6

 

3rd
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The heavens aligned when my eyes met yours.
As a flurry of emotions stirred across my being.
I feared my heart would burst- never ending bliss.

I slowly pulled you close, sharing a soft embrace.
The smell of your skin and hair- sweet and natural.
Shiver with excitement, the beginning of a astonishing kiss.

We pull in closer, your breath is mine and mine is yours.
Heavy and rapid the beating of the heart becomes.
A tighter embrace, the grip become firm against flesh.

Our lips meet, like a butterfly to a pedal soft and light.
Gradually becoming heavier, sharing more of each other.
Softer than silk, sweeter than sweet, our first kiss. (see more)
 
Adroit
RATING: 4.4  VIEWS: 159  VOTES: 4

 

4th
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Maybe I need some rehab,
Or maybe just need some sleep
I've got a sick obsession,
I'm seeing it in my dreams

I'm looking down every alley,
I'm making those desperate calls
Im staying up all night hoping,
Hit my head against the walls

What you've got boy is hard to find
Think about it all about it all the time
I'm all strung up my heart is fried
I just cant get you off my mind

Because your love, your love, your love, is my drug
Your love your love your love
I said your love, your love, your love, is my drug
Your love your love your love (see more)
 
N0Caffeine
RATING: 4.2  VIEWS: 136  VOTES: 9

 

5th
Tonight I can write the saddest lines.
Write, for example: "The night is shattered,
and the blue stars shiver in the distance."
The night wind revolves in the sky and sings.
Tonight I can write the saddest lines.
That I loved her, and sometimes she loved me too.
On nights like this one, I held her in my arms.
I kissed her again and again under the endless sky.
She loved me, and sometimes I loved her too.
Tonight I can write the saddest lines.
To think that I do not have her. To feel I have lost her.
To hear the immense night, still more immense without her.
And the verse falls to the soul like dew to the pasture.
What does it matter that my love could not keep her.
The night is shattered, and she is not with me....
Because through nights like this one I held her in my arms,
my soul is not satisfied that it has lost her.
Though this be the last pain that she makes me suffer,
and these the last verses that I write for her. (see more)
 
Ama9a
RATING: 4.2  VIEWS: 109  VOTES: 7

 

6th
To see your smiling face
And know it’s not for me but for him
Ruins my day
To hear you laugh
As you walk with him
Makes me realize I’m just a friend
To see you kiss him
And know that I’ll never kiss you
Brings tears to my eyes
To know that I can say to you
“I love you” but know you think I mean it as friends
Breaks my heart completely
I wish we were more
If there was something I could do to win your heart
Would I not do it?
Why do you need me?
You don’t love me the way I love you and I always will love you
Why are you with him?
You belong with me.. Or maybe he’s just the one for you and I’m not
This is what you do to me
This is how my heart breaks (see more)
 
frapochino
RATING: 4.2  VIEWS: 100  VOTES: 3

 

7th
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She was the most beautiful Asian girl I had ever seen
She was blond, African and her eyes were green
She smelled like a summer breeze at the beach
She sang highs and lows no one could reach
She would flirt with me and tell me I'm great
She would pull on my sleeve and hint for a date
She waited on me but I was too shy
She now wears a ring that belongs to another guy
Infinite possibilities many fishes in the sea
But wait too long, not make a single attempt
you'll be lonely like me. (see more)
 
Adroit
RATING: 4.1  VIEWS: 126  VOTES: 4

 

8th
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These animals, these military dogs, blindly follow
trust, loyalty and faith, I will never comprehend
I can only wish, one day to have half of what they have,
maybe then God will consider me
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RJBlack9
RATING: 4.0  VIEWS: 133  VOTES: 5

 

9th
mY hollyday in France ,
I can remember the warnings
freedom and the happy days
me that 's income to you
born to my view
forever grateful, hand on me heart says i will the
I like you and am proud of resident  (see more)
 
Joyce_R
RATING: 4.5  VIEWS: 84  VOTES: 2

 

10th
Je voudrai retourner avec toi,
Même si ça ne nous mène nulle part,
Juste histoire de retâter un peu
De ta tendresse.
Je voudrai retourner avec toi,
Car je n’en plus de l’absence,
Et de l’éternité sans horizon.
Je ne me fais pas
A cette putain de solitude.
Je voudrai retourner avec toi
Car j’ai besoins d’amour.
J’ai beau voyager,
Voir des amis,
Boire,
Cette mélancolie ne ma lâche pas.

Je voudrai retourner avec toi,
Me rallonger sur ce lit,
Pouvoir t’embrasser quand ça me chante,
Décider de faire l’amour
Avant de prendre le petit déjeuner.
Je voudrai retourner avec toi,
Pour que tu ma fasses à nouveau oublier
Celle que j’ai trop aimée.
Je voudrai retourner avec toi,
Car j’aime toujours ton visage,
Et que je m’essouffle
A force de penser à nous.

Aujourd’hui
Je me dis que cette nuit là,
J’aurai du rester dormir.
Au moins, on aurait souffert
Pour de bon.
Aujourd’hui,
J’ai revu ta tignasse blonde,
Co (see more)
 
bisoudahkabouli
RATING: 4.4  VIEWS: 83  VOTES: 1

 

11th
Aujourd’hui
Je me dis que cette nuit là,
J’aurai du rester dormir.
Au moins, on aurait souffert
Pour de bon.
Aujourd’hui,
J’ai revu ta tignasse blonde,
Collé par le sel,
Bouffé par le vent.
Aujourd’hui,
J’ai voulu retourner avec toi,
De tout mon être,
De tout mon corps (see more)
 
bisoudahkabouli
RATING: 4.3  VIEWS: 58  VOTES: 0

 

12th
I shall want to go back with you,
Even if this leads us nowhere,
Fair history to re-feel little
Of your cordiality.
I shall want to go back with you,
Because I not besides absence,
And of eternity without skyline.
I am not made
To this whore of loneliness.
I shall want to go back with you
Because I have needs of love.
I try unsuccessfully to travel,
See friends,
Drink,
This melancholia not my cowardly step.

I shall want to go back with you,
Extend me on this bed,
Be able to embrace each other when this sings to me,
Decide to make love
Before having breakfast.
I shall want to go back with you,
So that hushed up my again make forget
The one that I too much liked.
I shall want to go back with you,
Because I always like your face,
And that I get breathless
By thinking of us. (see more)
 
bisoudahkabouli
RATING: 4.3  VIEWS: 57  VOTES: 0

 

13th
Today
I tell myself that this night there,
I shall have of remain sleep.
At least, they would have suffered
Indeed.
Today,
I saw again your blonde mop of hair,
Glued together by salt,
Eaten by the wind.
Today,
I wanted to go back with you,
Of all my being,
Of all my body. (see more)
 
bisoudahkabouli
RATING: 4.2  VIEWS: 42  VOTES: 1

 

14th
Trembling knees
I stumble to the ground
Your mouth is moving
But I hear no sound
Sorrys unleashed
I blink afew bounds
Clashing bodies
Feeling hands
The murderous feeling
Your clawing touch
Your not forgiven
You've done it too much (see more)
 
emelia
RATING: 4.3  VIEWS: 18  VOTES: 0

 

15th
i stare out in the freezing weather,
tiny taps of rain soil my body,
i slowly get soaked,
not making any sudden movements,
admiring the gray dreary weather,
oh it looked just like my life,
i stand still reluctant to move,
the thoughts of him race though my mind,
my broken heart throbs,
like an open wound slowly gettin infected,
i take a deep breath and slowly begin walking again,
continue glaring at the sky,
lick the dirty rain from my lips.
and say goodbye (see more)
 
alex102392
RATING: 4.4  VIEWS: 47  VOTES: 1

 

16th

My true love is in my heart
I tell her that she is mine
She knows this this with tears
She loves me just as i love her
We are in love with joy and happiness
Everytime she hears me she is cheery
Everytime i hear her my soul becomes calm
She is like my light and hope
While i am her faith and dream
We will always be together forever in love
This is how love is supposed to be
Because love is true and pure
Not supposed to be full of disagreement
This is love is true and always will be. (see more)
 
TheKurokage
RATING: 4.0  VIEWS: 64  VOTES: 2

 

17th
boy you got me all backwards
got me fly'n while i am falling
got me spin'n while i am standing still
got my nights filled with clouds
and my days filled with stars
got my thoughts flowing through my finger tips
got me thinking why not instead of what if
got me cry'n for joy and jump'n in fear
boy you got me all twisted up and backwards
got this organized freak all changed up and
its for the better cause you got me changed in to
LOVE  (see more)
 
calhounrochelle
RATING: 4.3  VIEWS: 21  VOTES: 0

 

18th
Whisper me a sweet goodnight

for the dark sky is fragile

and if you shout, the black abyss may shatter

and shards of yellow will stream down upon us

this night so lonesome as you fly to your bed

the curtains scream at dawns awakening

and so do my eyes so puffed and weary

for you had to go and

whisper me a sweet goodnight
 (see more)
 
teeohharreye
RATING: 4.0  VIEWS: 50  VOTES: 2

 

19th
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So dumb, I do nothing,
for you have washed my brain,

So numb, I feel nothing,
for you have taken my heart,

As sweet as your lies,
the end bitter with a truth.

All of everything flies,
Those memories sweet and smooth. (see more)
 
Juduk_Lee
RATING: 4.3  VIEWS: 45  VOTES: 0





Comments

AdebaYor
AdebaYor legend
about 1 year ago
silver_surfer
silver_surfer franchise
about 1 year ago
re: Your Love Is My Drug
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silver_surfer
silver_surfer franchise
about 1 year ago
re: Gotgame
@JonnyBoy: Thank you very much !!!
JonnyBoy
JonnyBoy HOFer
about 1 year ago
re: Gotgame
5 :D
silver_surfer
silver_surfer franchise
about 1 year ago
silver_surfer
silver_surfer franchise
about 1 year ago
re: Gotgame
Thank you all !!!
neneneh666
neneneh666 franchise
about 1 year ago
re: Gotgame
nice 555
silver_surfer
silver_surfer franchise
about 1 year ago
jishjosh
jishjosh all-IBY
about 1 year ago
re: Gotgame
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Shlinki
Shlinki HOFer
about 1 year ago
re: Gotgame
awww
JonnyBoy
JonnyBoy HOFer
about 1 year ago
silver_surfer
silver_surfer franchise
about 1 year ago
re: JISHJOSH'S POEM BOUT GOTGAME
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jishjosh
jishjosh all-IBY
about 1 year ago
re: Your Love Is My Drug
I'M STARTING TO GET WORRIED ABOUT YOU NOCAFFEINE....IF YOU NEED TO TALK I'M HERE...MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA 55555555555555555
kekoa12
kekoa12 captain
about 1 year ago
re: Your Love Is My Drug
awsome poem i hope whoever you wrote this about loved it if not kick him in the nuts 5
Ama9a
Ama9a all-star
about 1 year ago
re: Pablo Neruda - Love song
Thanks everyone ;)
Shlinki
Shlinki HOFer
about 1 year ago
re: Your Love Is My Drug
awesome :)) 55
Adroit
Adroit all-american
about 1 year ago
re: Pablo Neruda - Love song
freaking Awesome!!!!
jishjosh
jishjosh all-IBY
about 1 year ago
slick_vicious
slick_vicious legend
about 1 year ago
re: How My Heart Breaks
@frapochino: yeah i'd say. Those words don't usually come out without a story.
Shlinki
Shlinki HOFer
about 1 year ago
re: Pablo Neruda - Love song
wow :) very nice!
frapochino
frapochino franchise
about 1 year ago
re: How My Heart Breaks
@slick_vicious: Thanks. I know. There's a whole story behind it but yeah... Thanks!
slick_vicious
slick_vicious legend
about 1 year ago
re: How My Heart Breaks
Awee very sad, but good! 5
 
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