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Most Thought Provoking (Original) Poem

Must be original, viewers should rate on how much the poem makes them think, and the quality of the poem.


total challengers: 2   
1st
One in a million
Becomes one in a hundred
Becomes one in ten

My chances are running out
My breath is running out
My time is running out
The fire on the ice is dimming out
The passion of the world is supressed by them
Them who want not to see freedom
Because to liberate to freedom is to destroy liberation.

If only they knew that democrasy wasn't the way forward
When the only people who put themselves forward, are just a few of the greedy, selfish souls out there

And it's come to this

That I flee fom the liberation they wish to perform
I flee from the ever-growing ice
I flee before they blow out the last of the the fire

They want to erase me
But I will not give up until I've rekindled the fire
It doesn't matter if the fire is in villians, volunteers, or in beasts.
If there are rebels, there is war
But if there is resistance, then there is hope.
Fear wont phase me
But a bullet will
I don't want to be a citizen erased
but it's worth it for a perfect world (see more)
 
JoeEllis1026
RATING: 4.3  VIEWS: 18  VOTES: 1

 

2nd
hmmmmmmmm..

ah nuts.. I forgot..

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GoGoFight
RATING: 2.8  VIEWS: 14  VOTES: 1





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