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short poetry of life and death

write a short poem about life, death, crossing over or something along those lines


total challengers: 4   
1st
As I walk through the light of heaven I see him
As I see all my loved ones smiling at me, I see him
As I feel love that could not be felt in life but only death, I see him
As he walks towards me and smiles, I smile back to frightened to look away as though he will only be in my imagination.
I feel light and lifted of all earthly fears, he comes to me as an angel of light, I look into his soul and know that I am home. (see more)
 
Heat_Girl
RATING: 4.1  VIEWS: 220  VOTES: 10

 

2nd
Dress your silky tunic,
attired with the pain of the world,
or his nicest million roses,
But don't take offense if tonight,
I eat by using my fingers (see more)
 
silver_surfer
RATING: 4.1  VIEWS: 207  VOTES: 4

 

3rd
In between life and death, we all creep,walk in search of that eternal light, for a garentee to sleep forever in paradise, to be at peace, to rest the soul within you, to no longer live nor breath but to watch over and wait for the ones you left behind, to disover and see life in a new perspective, a way you would have never found whilst you were alive (see more)
 
diamondrachie
RATING: 3.9  VIEWS: 184  VOTES: 7

 

4th
the Lord is my sheperd, i shall not be in want.
He makes me lie down in green pastures, he leads me beside quiet waters he restores my soul.
He guides me in paths or righteousness for his own name sake.
Even though I walk thru the valley of the shadow of DEATH,
I will fear no EVIL, for you are with me
your rod and your staff, they comfort me!
Psalms 23:1-4
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Hambone008
RATING: 3.8  VIEWS: 180  VOTES: 6





Comments

euvaam
euvaam all-state
over 2 years ago
re: Poetic
nice :)
NadiaYassin
over 2 years ago
re: Poetic
555
diamondrachie
diamondrachie varsity
over 2 years ago
re: Poem
thats really nice
daniel0417
daniel0417 HOFer
over 2 years ago
re: Poem
Excellent! I admire your talent. 555
Abdulionaire
Abdulionaire all-IBY
over 2 years ago
re: Poem
deep
tinpattaui
tinpattaui HOFer
over 2 years ago
re: Poem
great work!
 
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