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Best Love Poem

Write a love poem about anyone or anything!


total challengers: 39   
1st
I was blinded with love,
when I gazed in your eyes.
I knew you'd be there,
from night till sunrise.

And when I was cold,
you gave me your heat.
With your flawless slim body,
from your head to your feet.

I know I'm not perfect,
but I did turn you on.
You were my favorite of lamps,
but now you are gone... (see more)
 
nigahiga
RATING: 3.8  VIEWS: 3696  VOTES: 61

 

2nd
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If questioning would make us wise
No eyes would ever gaze in eyes;
If all our take were told in speech
No mouths would wander each to each


Were spirits free from mortal mesh
And love not bound in hearts of flesh
No aching would yearn to meet
And find their souls to be complete.


For who is there that lives and knows
The secret powers by which he grows
Were knowledge all, what were our need
To thrill and faint and sweetly bleed?


Than seek not sweet the "if" and "why"
I love you now until i die
For I must love until i live
And life in me is what you give


Hope you are doing great
For i must say when we me I know it was fate (see more)
 
AVJ21
RATING: 3.0  VIEWS: 1469  VOTES: 26

 

3rd
That one word that you made me say,
well made me realize I should say to you, should be something unexplainable...
Only something that we both feel.
The moment we locked eyes
I knew this was right.
There was no doubt in my mind that I could find someone who would make me feel this safe, loved and ...
Wanted.
I've never felt wanted before you.
Just used.
Nothing ever seemed true or real until you made me realize it.
Jus your touch.
Hand in hand,
Body on body,
Or your lips on mine,
That feeling of you so close to me,
Was a feeling I couldn't let go of.
I change what I say often.
Not being able to make sense of my ideas and my actions.
The only thing I can make sense of is how I feel about you.
How right this is.
How the moments we shared and will share will forever be ours .
I think it's safe to say that ,
I love you.
I always have though,
I realized this once I made a huge mistake by letting you go.
But now that you're back,
I'm holding on, forever. (see more)
 
cherine619
RATING: 2.8  VIEWS: 1132  VOTES: 21

 

4th
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Tonight I'll slumber
beneath a waxing moon
candle light burning
soft, sensual tune

just I and my thoughts
green tea, lemon twist
another soothing moment
lace, cotton tryst

romance all aglow
fragrant of lilac oil
meditation, passion fantasy
bringing ones heart to boil

mysteries of a woman alone
reaching heights of orgasmic confessions
elegantly dancing within a fragrant dark room
pampering myself, late night obsession....  (see more)
 
ac900
RATING: 2.8  VIEWS: 602  VOTES: 8

 

5th
I met a girl, her name was heather

She likes gymnastics, she's as light as a feather.

I told her one day if we can hang around at the mall.

But when she replied, her breath smelled like balls.

I quickly covered my nose and started to cry.

She was wondering "Maybe that he's alittle shy"

She didn't know that her breath smelled so bad.

I didn't want to break out the mints, she might get mad.

So, I went to her house the other day.

She said "I cant go to the mall, so how about you stay?"

I sadly said yes, and went inside her house.

I made a bad choice, It smells like a dead mouse.

She took me to the kitchen, for a little snack.

She made me a sandwich that looked like my uncle`s back.

Hair, mushrooms, and sand were covered on my food.

I threw it away, I wasnt trying to be rude.

I told her that "I gotta go, I got things to do"

So I ran like the wind outside that house of poo.

:D, sry. That's all I can write now. lol (see more)
 
tony_mejias
RATING: 2.7  VIEWS: 1528  VOTES: 24

 

6th
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She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies:
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes:
Thus mellow'd to that tender light
Which heaven to gaudy day denies.

One shade the more, one ray the less
Had half impair'd the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress,
Or softly lightens o'er her face:
Where thoughts serenely sweet express
How pure, how dear their dwelling place.

And on that cheek, and o'er that brow,
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
But tell of days in goodness spent,
A mind at peace with all below,
A heart whose love is innocent!
 (see more)
 
omgsocute
RATING: 2.7  VIEWS: 1109  VOTES: 16

 

7th
Would you kiss me if I were a corpse? She asked.

Her voice was softer than the cricket’s tread.
Her scent, far sweeter than the 4 o’clocks in bloom.


Yes, I said capturing her soft lips with mine.

Her eyes shown brighter than the moon that night.
Her warmth, so inviting against the gentle breeze.


And when they lay me deep down to sleep? She asked.

What then will become of you, fond lover?
I kissed her once more. Her neck, her jaw, her brow…

Then they should lay my soul to rest along side yours,
For without you, this world would be a cold dead place.
A constant reminder of our last kiss.
 (see more)
 
doombee
RATING: 2.7  VIEWS: 487  VOTES: 3

 

8th
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Do You Want Me, Too?
(Lyrics by Michael W. Schramm)


I been shot at, I been stabbed, and I fought any size dude you can look at
I’ve had my share of troubles and been damn near dead and I laughed
I’ve even looked Death in the face and just laughed harder
I know no fear when there were seconds to live
But girl, There’s just one thing I need a little courage to do

Darlin’, I ain’t a man of many words, I just can’t find what I need to say
When I look into your soft brown eyes I’m a horse that goes lame
I just want to hold you in my arms till night turns to day

I been bucked off bulls, almost had a horn in my ass
Broke some bones and damn near broke my back
You know they say pain don’t last
But talkin’ to you, girl, that ain’t my knack

I don’t know why I’m this way
I had a lot of heartache in my day
This is the only way I know how to say it
Just listen to the words of this song
My heart skips a beat and my world starts spinnin’
Words can’t say how I feel abo (see more)
 
cowboy198027
RATING: 2.7  VIEWS: 491  VOTES: 3

 

9th
You’re my last breath: last thought
Just like the end of my life
You’re my line of hope that keeps my heart racing when it’s at its last beat
When all hope is lost and my line fails,
I think of you, and it beats as fast to prove my love for you
And if I had one wish it would be to see you,
So I can feel that race again
And even though we’re far apart, we will always share the same heart
 (see more)
 
skylor13
RATING: 2.6  VIEWS: 1418  VOTES: 22

 

10th
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In the still of the evening
Without sunlight to intrude
I see the twilight's in your eyes
As the moon sets up the mood

Playing music soft and low
While romance fills the air
I can't help but feel aroused
The very moment you come near

You submit to my embrace
While candles flick their flame
And the smell of sweet perfume
Seems to drive my lust insane

As I look into your eyes
And run my fingers through your hair
I taste the sweetness of your neck
As I nibble at your ear

I then whisper words of love
As you answer with a sigh
And in a very sexy way
Your sweet body comes alive

Your the heat of my desire
As we slowly come undress
I then start to lay you down
While you welcome my caress

With your luscious sexy curves
You have a taste I can't resist
And your breast show some response
When I touch them with a kiss

As I soak inside your love
To a sexy love condition
Feeling passions start to rise
While making love in all positions

You give me so much pleasure
For ecstasy (see more)
 
T_BONE
RATING: 2.6  VIEWS: 570  VOTES: 7

 

11th
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When I woke up this morning and I saw your pretty eyes,
I got lost in them again...to remember how I really feel inside.
You piss me off sometimes, I swear,
and even more times, I'm glad we're here.
All the sadness and the madness,
Feelings so chaotic I'm sure,
So I took a deep breath and the thing that came next,
Came to my head as I hit the floor.

Life would go on without you if it had to,
I know it's sad, but it's true.
Life would move on without you if it came to,
But I'd rather it'll be with you two.

I remember all the bad times, the good times, and of course... the cold,
In my heart and in my soul, My love for you will never get old.
I will never lead you astray...
It's because of you, that I'll stay.
You' re my determination, You are my life,
You are the reason I will never give up this fight.
So to you, I'll say good night,
Tuck you under your covers, now sleep tight.


To my wife and son,
Les (see more)
 
Rosto
RATING: 2.6  VIEWS: 451  VOTES: 11

 

12th
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I open my eyes with nothing to see...
you open the door and what do you see?
you see a reflection of the person you love...
i'm trapped in this room so dark and rare,until i saw you nothing can compare
the way you look, the way you stare, the way the air flows through your hair
the way your eyes are facing mine, like the day i was told to be your valentine

Only if you knew, how much i love you..
that i loved you with a love much more stronger than ever.
only if you knew how much i care..
that i care for you much more than anything in this world.
if only you knew....

Im all alone in this room so dark and scary..
no one by my side, im so weak and weary
i hear a tapping coming from the wall..i race up not knowing who can it be..
i open up the door and what do i see?
i see you..
i see you make your way towards mine...
running and screaming, you found me...

You found me lost in this ro (see more)
 
4everdeadrocker
RATING: 2.6  VIEWS: 289  VOTES: 8

 

13th
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My Reese Haiku.

Once, Twice, Three Times Delicious
The Best 5 Minutes Of My Life.
I'll Buy Some More Later.

 (see more)
 
Abdulionaire
RATING: 2.5  VIEWS: 1184  VOTES: 22

 

14th

Close the shutters and let the darkness in
We'll breathe eachother's air eternally
I don't remember how long it has been
Since I felt your pulse rising gradually
Since I felt the smell of your skin...

In this embrace we shall forever stay
Living on eachother's love
In these sheets where we now lay
I will take you to Heavens and above
Dawn to dusk I'll feel your breath on my skin...

Remove the veil from around your soul
Let me dress you in white silk
There is nothing more than what we know
Diamonds outshined, in shame will sink
When I will worship your luculent skin (see more)
 
Lollo
RATING: 2.5  VIEWS: 311  VOTES: 11

 

15th
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It might not make sense cos i wrote it lol! It might be useless you decide :)

My Love
Your skin glows like the Amazing, blossoms Tulip as the Guitar in the purest hope of spring.
My heart follows your Lion voice and leaps like a Dove at the whisper of your name.
The evening floats in on a great Hat wing.
I am comforted by your garden that I carry into the twilight of eyesbeams and hold next to my water.
I am filled with hope that I may dry your tears of nose.
As my shoes falls from my house, it reminds me of your Screech.
In the quiet, I listen for the last Hands of the day.
My heated Scarf leaps to my Beach. I wait in the moonlight for your secret smiled so that we may Red as one, Scarf to Scarf, in search of the magnificient bar and mystical bar of love. (see more)
 
bulldoggx
RATING: 2.5  VIEWS: 907  VOTES: 19

 

16th
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a stranger crept
underneath my skin
i stayed still defenseless
this time i did nothing
should i have done something?

i lost you before i even had you
but your touch will remain forever
i will reminisce this soon forgotten dream
until i am exhausted in this
ephemeral state of mind (see more)
 
behjean3
RATING: 2.5  VIEWS: 481  VOTES: 12

 

17th
I Love You
It's so true
Go Poo Poo
aww, ew ew.


The END.

lol (see more)
 
snimmybill
RATING: 2.5  VIEWS: 378  VOTES: 10

 

18th
The only reason why,
I feel like I want to cry.
The only reason why,
I sometimes felt shy.

The only reason why,
I sometimes act depressed.
The only reason why,
I try to look my best.

The only reason why,
I’m filled with all this stress.
The only reason why,
I always try to impress.

The only reason why,
I hate the other girl.
The only reason why,
I wish I was your only precious pearl.

The only reason why,
I want to know who is she,
The only reason why,
I wish it was me.

The only reason why,
I try to act cool.
The only reason why,
I know I act like a fool.

The only reason why
This has never happened before.
The only reason why,
I can’t take this anymore.

The only reason why,
I just can‘t let go.
The only reason why,
I just want to know.

The only reason why,
I just don’t understand.
The only reason why,
I always lend a helping hand.

The only reason why,
I do the things I do.
The only reason why,
Is all because of you.  (see more)
 
aznpryde77
RATING: 2.4  VIEWS: 322  VOTES: 10

 

19th
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Where does love stay and where does it grow,
on the other side of this crazy sideshow?
"You are my sunshine"... to you I'll spout,
"You are my moon"... to you I'll shout.

You seem to exist everywhere I look,
I can't seem to get away, even while I cook.
Is it mere infatuation, or is it love?
I guess I could leave my fate to the ones up above...

Why do you torment me, Why can't I sleep?
As I shut my eyes this moment, I see you in my dreams.
How can I regain my sanity,
When it is you that has become... all of me?

I don't see the future without your face,
Even if we float off on a cloud into outer space.
You are the absence of existence, my inner pain,
For when you are gone, In this coffin I'll remain... (see more)
 
Rosto
RATING: 2.4  VIEWS: 312  VOTES: 10

 

20th
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Rendez vous arrangé
Regards croisés
Je n'aurais jamais pensé
Recevoir un baiser de toi
Me retournerais CE point des Nations unies.

Etreintes de quelques nuits
Caresses infinis
Tes mains sur moi,
Tu me dis: Ne t'en va pas

La tête pleine de doute
J'ai Reprendre la route du
Sans jamais t'oublier
Ainsi j'ai pu continuateur

Depuis quatres longues années
J'ai fais comme si de rien n'etait
J'ai continuateur de l'ONU Avancer
Jamais sans Cesse de t'aimer (see more)
 
Sandra76
RATING: 2.4  VIEWS: 559  VOTES: 14



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Comments

Travis_Pham
Travis_Pham peewee
5 months ago
re: You Lit up my Life
Asian win go nigahiga (Ryan. Higa)
neltra
neltra peewee
about 1 year ago
re: You Lit up my Life
dag hes good
NarutaFoxx
about 1 year ago
re: You Lit up my Life
Noo!!! Why??? WHY? Why did the lamp leave you?
jamiemd123
jamiemd123 all-state
over 2 years ago
re: You Lit up my Life
awww thats to bad that your lamp couldnt live longer
Jose_Contreras
Jose_Contreras all-city
over 2 years ago
re: You Lit up my Life
omfg lmfao
Gaurav23
Gaurav23 peewee
over 2 years ago
Hambone008
Hambone008 all-IBY
over 2 years ago
re: Heather: By Tony_Mejias
wtf lol555
4everdeadrocker
4everdeadrocker starter
over 2 years ago
re: The One
I couldnt fit the rest so ill write it here. room so dark and dreary.. you saw me hopeless and lonely, suffocating in sorrow.. not knowing what to do, you found me lost in this world of anger and dismay.. but what can i say, i didnt ask for this to happen, but now you found me.. and as i cried in your arms so soft and beautiful, like heaven to touch you whispered in my ear and said that i was the one....
4everdeadrocker
4everdeadrocker starter
over 2 years ago
re: The One
i couldnt fit the whole thing here so ill just write the rest in a comment
Paul_Campos
Paul_Campos varsity
over 2 years ago
re: You Lit up my Life
haha sorta sweet but funny 5 :)
cowboy198027
over 2 years ago
re: Not really a poem but a song i writ...
It didnt get all the words in there---here's the rest--------My heart skips a beat and my world starts spinnin’ Words can’t say how I feel about you But Darlin’, I can show you what’s inside my heart The only thing is do you want me to Do you want me to hold you in my arms and make time stand still? Do you want me, too? Do you want me, too?
Yinnie
Yinnie all-city
over 2 years ago
re: You Lit up my Life
my lamp is white, bright and shining.. sorry for ur loss ;)
SrVigalot
SrVigalot HOFer
over 2 years ago
4everdeadrocker
4everdeadrocker starter
over 2 years ago
re: The One
I couldnt fit the rest so ill write it here. room so dark and dreary.. you saw me hopeless and lonely, suffocating in sorrow.. not knowing what to do, you found me lost in this world of anger and dismay.. but what can i say, i didnt ask for this to happen, but now you found me.. and as i cried in your arms so soft and beautiful, like heaven to touch you whispered in my ear and said that i was the one....
4everdeadrocker
4everdeadrocker starter
over 2 years ago
re: The One
I give all credit to my girlfriend.She made it.
4everdeadrocker
4everdeadrocker starter
over 2 years ago
re: You Lit up my Life
were have i heard this before?
Fire_Ice
Fire_Ice varsity
over 2 years ago
re: You Lit up my Life
"You were my favorite of lamps". Lmfao!! Poor lamp :(. My lamp is saving my life right now, the light bulb in my room broke, pfft.
AVJ21
AVJ21 franchise
over 2 years ago
re: untitled
very moving so great its a 5
LindsayMiles2oo9
LindsayMiles2oo9 all-american
over 2 years ago
re: You Lit up my Life
It...its so beautiful...lol nice.
steve
steve all-IBY
over 2 years ago
steve
steve all-IBY
over 2 years ago
re: Down Vote XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
whoa dude, you wrote this?!
snimmybill
snimmybill all-star
over 2 years ago
re: You Lit up my Life
hiLARIOUS!
Geust_User_JK
Geust_User_JK varsity
over 2 years ago
re: You Lit up my Life
My lamp's lightbulb broke like three years ago and I never replaced it.... I spent alot of nights reading with that lamp.....
winniecullen
winniecullen peewee
over 2 years ago
re: You Lit up my Life
omg lampss.funny.. seen all ur videos on youtube... and u like lamps..lol
 
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