competition: words (love or hate): best original poem

entry: Follow Up of Break Up by Juduk_Lee

Follow Up of Break Up
So dumb, I do nothing,
for you have washed my brain,

So numb, I feel nothing,
for you have taken my heart,

As sweet as your lies,
the end bitter with a truth.

All of everything flies,
Those memories sweet and smooth.

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DATE ENTERED: Aug 02, 2010 06:05:11pm PDT
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