competition: Best Love Poem

entry: The Untouchable Fire by dcross

I noticed you from the first second I placed my eyes on you;

You stand out like the sun sitting in the middle of a dark room;

Your beauty looked so brilliant;

I would love to touch you and watch my hand melt as you flame;

your smile felt like heat when I'm feeling cold;

You are like something precious such as gold;

But it's just too bad you are not that easy to hold;

Otherwise, I would burn with you forever.

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RATING: 2.2  VIEWS: 103  VOTES: 7
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DATE ENTERED: Nov 01, 2009 11:08:38am PST
FINISHED: 26th