competition: best rap verse, yours.

entry: continued from above by andyhahn

the above verse is supposed to end like this....."and then we'll see."

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demont33n
demont33n peewee
10 months ago
re: continued from above
here we go again its anutha long day,go head take me down a road where there's no wrong wayonly right turns where everythings fine, not even the slightest concerns will haunt our mindslets travel this world without knowin and no care,we dont kno where we goin we'll find out when we get thereno set course no directions to follow, gettin pushed by an unknown force chasin after tomorrowno more drownin in our sorrow cuz this life is hard to swallowchew it up spit it out brush away the after taste,sit up get out theres no more time to waste,only a new day to face, only anutha breath to take come on lets take a break stop worrying bout our mistakes it just isn't worth it, remember that we live in a world where noones perfectwe just try our best to maintain our happiness and push away our stresseveryday its either more or less but always enough, and i must confess sometimes it feels like its too muchbut i wont stand here and cry and fuss,fuck everyone who try to lie to us tell dem to go ride a bus i got an a-k ready
demont33n
demont33n peewee
10 months ago
re: continued from above
here we go again its anutha long day,go head take me down a road where there's no wrong wayonly right turns where everythings fine, not even the slightest concerns will haunt our mindslets travel this world without knowin and no care,we dont kno where we goin we'll find out when we get thereno set course no directions to follow, gettin pushed by an unknown force chasin after tomorrowno more drownin in our sorrow cuz this life is hard to swallowchew it up spit it out brush away the after taste,sit up get out theres no more time to waste,only a new day to face, only anutha breath to take come on lets take a break stop worrying bout our mistakes it just isn't worth it, remember that we live in a world where noones perfectwe just try our best to maintain our happiness and push away our stresseveryday its either more or less but always enough, and i must confess sometimes it feels like its too muchbut i wont stand here and cry and fuss,fuck everyone who try to lie to us tell dem to go ride a bus i got an a-k ready
demont33n
demont33n peewee
10 months ago
re: continued from above
ck tock thats not the sound of a clock thats my wrist watch watch how my fist lock loaded countdown ready for lift off where do you get off gettin me pissed off talkin bout bein somethin u is not come on my block n your block willl get knocked off yea its true that i beat pussies like you just to get my rocks off n i dont need to take my socks off ha! talkin bout truth let me tell you what truth is truth is when u can prove it which you cant so its useless you dont fight you run away and come back wit excuses next time u wana battle run away n come back wit some new shyt,like a chain smokers cigarettes i stay lit burnin a bitch wit every lyric that i spit its like i drank gasoline and swallowed a lit match im burpin up flames so just get back u'll need oven mits to touch my track, u can drown and my flow watch it circle around you like a whirlpool thats what u get for jumpin in thinkin that your cool ill leave u spinnin left in a daze you'll be amazed by my lyrical ways my talents im chemically unbalanced u t
CriminalxIntent
10 months ago
re: continued from above
like that fella named Regis*
CriminalxIntent
10 months ago
re: continued from above
I didn't know how to join the comeptition so I'm going to comment it... Ya realitys altered when the sky aggressively darkens, Throw you in a dog park full of arsons, serial killas and robba's, Who've been labeled unstable or mentally retarded, to harm ya in a locka, brawlin' between Doc Oc and the Spida', Stop lyin' to yuhself while an honest god's behind ya, This Criminal Intents comin' out to find ya, Double-time ya, I'm Troubled minded, Fuck what ya heard, the rough's become diamond,-- Yeah, And I see so many unimaginative people, Whos never made an album but they callin' a sequal, Its gotta be a problem somewhere in the cerebrum, to leave them thinkin' they actually got talent with reason, I just sit back relax at the table of demons, patiently waitin' for one of them to be eaten, By this evil I'm keepin' under my sleeve to get even, I'm raisin' my middle finger its my favorite apendage, Beatin' up rappa's till they lyrics deminish, The genius slash menace, yellin' Good Mornin' America! like that fella
andyhahn
RATING: 5.0  VIEWS: 40  VOTES: 0
KEYWORDS: lyrics songs
DATE ENTERED: Jul 01, 2012 06:08:51pm PDT
FINISHED: 1st