competition: Best Poem

entry: Untitled Poem by LoveAmelia

How I've waited all the precious time.
Just making my way off the stage.
These memories are a thousand miles away.
That's how faces passed; it's waiting for simple melodies.
Making my way blankly ahead through the crowd.
And now I wonder, will these memories fade?
There's a world out there to deserve a little more everyday.
I close my eyes; on the inside when I fall apart... thinking about tomorrow.
This would never end, and waiting for something else out there.
Everything's so wrong, but I ain't got no need to make it all better.
Thinking times will never change as we go on and remember.
And this is how it feels when memories fade.
I can feel it in my heart, it won't interfere.
As our lives change, piece me back together

Comments

 
 
Laguim
Laguim starter
over 3 years ago
re: Untitled Poem
okay so u don't write for me :( i sad very sad:( lol !!!
LoveAmelia
LoveAmelia HOFer
over 3 years ago
re: Untitled Poem
Laguim: Actually, I wrote this for my creative writing class.
Laguim
Laguim starter
over 3 years ago
re: Untitled Poem
i can't vote so i give u an award!!!:) Best Poem !!!
Laguim
Laguim starter
over 3 years ago
re: Untitled Poem
aaaaaaaaaaaaaw it's for me!:) loool 5 !!!
LoveAmelia
LoveAmelia HOFer
over 3 years ago
re: Untitled Poem
Bettar: Thanks!
Bettar
Bettar captain
over 3 years ago
re: Untitled Poem
Very Nice 5/5
LoveAmelia
LoveAmelia HOFer
over 3 years ago
re: Untitled Poem
Hardyyy: Thanks! I wrote it myself.
hardyyy
hardyyy all-IBY
over 3 years ago
LoveAmelia
RATING: 3.8  VIEWS: 101  VOTES: 10
KEYWORDS: art
DATE ENTERED: Aug 27, 2009 04:01:18pm PDT
FINISHED: 1st