competition: Best Original Poetry

entry: Mourning Sadness by shmangie

Shall I mourn for all to see
Or will you just let me be
I told you once, I told you twice
But you won't leave me alone.

He is gone now,
Far away,
And to you I make this vow
To be with you forever and always

Your crying causes pain
Like a thousand stinging bees,
But continue with it,
Because no one else gets it
Like you.

He's no longer coming back,
But you are still here.

That piercing pain
That you perpetually feel,
Is felt by others too.

Just know,
You are not alone,
In this cold world of mourn.

Comments

 
 
shmangie
shmangie HOFer
over 2 years ago
re: Mourning Sadness
@ank1408: thank you!!!
ank1408
ank1408 peewee
over 2 years ago
re: Mourning Sadness
wonderful
shmangie
shmangie HOFer
over 2 years ago
re: Mourning Sadness
@Johanek78: i don't think he ever read it...i never had him read it
Johanek78
Johanek78 all-star
over 2 years ago
re: Mourning Sadness
@shmangie: Beautiful really !! Your father must have liked it
wacko_boy
wacko_boy captain
over 2 years ago
re: Mourning Sadness
5555+
shmangie
shmangie HOFer
over 2 years ago
re: Mourning Sadness
@Johanek78: thanks. i wrote it after my dad's friend died.
Johanek78
Johanek78 all-star
over 2 years ago
re: Mourning Sadness
wow 55555555
shmangie
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DATE ENTERED: Oct 17, 2010 10:23:20am PDT
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