competition: Best Original Poetry
entry: Mourning Sadness by shmangie
Shall I mourn for all to see
Or will you just let me be
I told you once, I told you twice
But you won't leave me alone.
He is gone now,
Far away,
And to you I make this vow
To be with you forever and always
Your crying causes pain
Like a thousand stinging bees,
But continue with it,
Because no one else gets it
Like you.
He's no longer coming back,
But you are still here.
That piercing pain
That you perpetually feel,
Is felt by others too.
Just know,
You are not alone,
In this cold world of mourn.
Or will you just let me be
I told you once, I told you twice
But you won't leave me alone.
He is gone now,
Far away,
And to you I make this vow
To be with you forever and always
Your crying causes pain
Like a thousand stinging bees,
But continue with it,
Because no one else gets it
Like you.
He's no longer coming back,
But you are still here.
That piercing pain
That you perpetually feel,
Is felt by others too.
Just know,
You are not alone,
In this cold world of mourn.
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re: Mourning Sadness
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@Johanek78: i don't think he ever read it...i never had him read it
@Johanek78: i don't think he ever read it...i never had him read it
re: Mourning Sadness
@shmangie: Beautiful really !! Your father must have liked it
@shmangie: Beautiful really !! Your father must have liked it
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@Johanek78: thanks. i wrote it after my dad's friend died.
@Johanek78: thanks. i wrote it after my dad's friend died.
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@ank1408: thank you!!!